Overtime

 After we finished what we thought was good I thought it would be a good idea to have some people to look at it. I asked each person to give honest opinions on hat could be improved. Mostly everyone said that the title scene could do some work. I spent a bit of time improving on things they mentioned. After a bit of work all of the people I showed it to thought it was better. They then mentioned that some of the cuts were a little to sudden. I quickly fixed it up by lengthening some and completely altering others.  A few other people also thought some of the music we put in did not fit well with the theme of the film. This problem I brought up with my groupmates with a few other ideas for music and they also agreed that there were better choices. After a bit of fixing up I presented the film one more time to another group and they all had very little problems that we thought were fine. With some extra time we wanted to try a different scene for our film. We all met up at my house this time as we thought of another way to end our film. The process was very quick we only filmed one short scene. After filming we all edited on my computer. We put it and and it looked pretty good. We asked a few people on what they thought would be a better ending. The new one seemed to be more popular. We got all the timing right and for everything and figured it would work out which it did. I decided we would save the editing for a later date and stop there. Were almost reached the end.